My Writers Circle
Poets Corner => Review My Poetry => Topic started by: Tom 10 on February 25, 2016, 02:01:30 PM
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My Muse Passed Out
My muse passed out
she got sh*t-faced last night
and is sleeping it off.
She ran off with the mailman.
My muse hides in the attic
behind leather suitcases.
She cashed my bonds
and split for Vegas.
My muse has narcolepsy.
She got into the bad weed,
found the last bottles
of the bathtub gin from March a year ago.
She gets hives from my computer screen
and hates my keyboard.
I give up making excuses for her.
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Nice one. I'll be back tomorrow. My laptop is about to pass out right now. That, and I need food. :D
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Ha! At least she provides good material. Nice one, T.
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Just a tad misogynistic Mr T! I am outraged by this. :o
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Maybe she's just been out on loan for 133. In which case she's earned a rest.
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Just a tad misogynistic Mr T! I am outraged by this. :o
Hardly! She has abused me and my good nature mercilessly and has been awol much too frequently. I refuse to cover for her any longer. >:(
Thanks for the look-see's Gyppo, Mark, and Liam. :)
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Interesting, but reads a little too much like a laundry list for me.
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Maybe she's just been out on loan for 133. In which case she's earned a rest.
It's a good thing she didn't come this way to try to get me to write anything, my own muse is quite the jealous type.
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;D ;D ;D
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Tom,
take for her a moonlight walk.
Ply her with chocolate and strawberries.
Let her know you miss and need her.
She will return with a smile,
be nice, attentive whats needed.
She'll warp her arms around your neck
and once more, whisper in your ear
the words you've been lost without.
Okay, not much in the way of poetry . . . but I'll bet she could fix it.
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Yeah, like that's gonna happen! Mr. Prolific ::)
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What a charming poetic response, Alice!
drab - we both know the name of the real prolific one starts with 5. ;D
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Tom
This is excellent and hilarious and proves itself to be utterly wrong. It is a classic case of the pot calling itself black.
Dave
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If you find her, tell her to send mine on home. I'm sure they're off gallivanting (probably with several others).
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;D ;D ;D
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Mine's most likely drunk. ;D
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They're all the Muse Spa, pigging out on chocolate and Chardonnay, throwing bread rolls at the pool boys. Mine had the courtesy to send a email.
Having a good time with the other lasses. Weather here, wish you were lovely. Please send money.
PS: Sending this via my Galaxy because they make us check in our laptops on arrival.
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They're all the Muse Spa, pigging out on chocolate and Chardonnay, throwing bread rolls at the pool boys. Mine had the courtesy to send a email.
Having a good time with the other lasses. Weather here, wish you were lovely. Please send money.
PS: Sending this via my Galaxy because they make us check in our laptops on arrival.
;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
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... they make us check in our laptops on arrival.[/i]
Lest we should relent and message our masters an idea.
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Playful, and hugely entertaining Tom.
best
matty
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I think that I would like this better if there was a timeframe of some sort, not as mechanical as "On Monday, she . . . ; on Tuesday . . . ," but something.
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Thanks Matty, Lon, for reading and commenting.
:)
T