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Title: Rat Splat
Post by: Tom 10 on November 20, 2014, 10:39:19 AM

   Rat Splat

On scorching pavement
harder baked makes easier
in one piece to spatulate
the rat-splat, purple-dark,
just like that, the Rorschach
tire mat, full-shocked
former fluff of Flemish cat.


Title: Re: Rat Splat
Post by: Mark T on November 20, 2014, 10:45:49 AM

You're one sick puppy, Tom.  ;D
Title: Re: Rat Splat
Post by: Tom 10 on November 20, 2014, 10:47:18 AM
Why thank you Mark. 8)
Title: Re: Rat Splat
Post by: heidi52 on November 21, 2014, 08:20:15 AM
Too funny.

Spatulate  ;D ;D ;D
Title: Re: Rat Splat
Post by: Tom 10 on November 21, 2014, 09:19:08 AM
Too funny.

Spatulate  ;D ;D ;D

I verbified it. 8)
Title: Re: Rat Splat
Post by: heidi52 on November 21, 2014, 02:01:49 PM
I verbified it. 8)

Obviously, it should have been a verb all along.  ;D ;D ;D
Title: Re: Rat Splat
Post by: 510bhan on November 21, 2014, 06:07:49 PM
This is class! ;D It rivals flat cat. ;)
Title: Re: Rat Splat
Post by: Tom 10 on November 22, 2014, 09:19:31 AM
This is class! ;D It rivals flat cat. ;)

Flat Cat?
Title: Re: Rat Splat
Post by: 510bhan on November 22, 2014, 08:10:05 PM
Can't find the poem in the search . . . the one about a A Dog Lover's something or other for a cat. Travelling the roads in NI over Ligoneil Hill etc.and poor old flat cat getting stuck to the tyres. ;D

EDIT: Found it ! :D     http://mywriterscircle.com/index.php?topic=48494.0
Title: Re: Rat Splat
Post by: Tom 10 on November 23, 2014, 10:07:43 AM
How could I forget "Flat cat, squashed on the tarmac"!  That was a wonderful poem. Thanks for recalling it  8)
Title: Re: Rat Splat
Post by: Vienna on November 23, 2014, 10:42:24 AM
it's a bit like the childrens tv programme theme.


Post man Pat, Postman Pat
Postman Pat ran over his cat
lalalalalala
Title: Re: Rat Splat
Post by: Tom 10 on November 23, 2014, 10:42:53 AM
 ;D ;D