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Poets Corner => Review My Poetry => Topic started by: "lorraineofkeli" on June 19, 2006, 02:53:32 PM

Title: Apollyon
Post by: "lorraineofkeli" on June 19, 2006, 02:53:32 PM
Hi, please let me know what you think of the following poem.
Thank you  :)
Lorraine


As the night is bright, day turns light
These hollows deceive me
My soul completely
losing against the narrow fight -
in the night.

The moon does not glow
Dismal, silent
My movement the essence of all around me
Absorbing the scenery -
as I kill.

Blood seeping
through my weeping eyes
Nails scratching deeply
- ease my mind -
- ease my mind -

Take it soundly, discreetly
yet knowingly and kindly
Gratefully receiving
the cold of the night.