My Writers Circle
The Coffee Shop => The Gallery => Topic started by: Linda Aitchison on February 18, 2010, 01:56:06 PM
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Hi - just wanted to post a later version of a poem here after members were kind enough to give me feedback and constructive criticism, a link to it was included in the Times Online today (The Alphamummy blog) so I am chuffed and very grateful for the support here, thank you.
Blogger's Lament
I don't want to watch Dancing on Ice tonight
If it's all the same to you
I'd like to canter starkers through the lounge
Then see what you would do
So sorry I can't give you a lift today
Here's hoping you won't mind
When I disgrace myself at an all night gig
And see what fun I'll find.
So while you think I fool upstairs with my blog,
Weaving one post after another
Truth is I've shimmied down the drainpipe
To wrestle an energetic lover