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Title: A soft gloomy morning
Post by: lena on May 30, 2006, 02:27:14 AM
On a soft gloomy morning
She knocked upon my door
On a soft gloomy morning love came in through my window
On a soft gloomy morning she brought some trouble with her
My whole world became gloomy
Since she's not with me anymore
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Title: Re: A soft gloomy morning
Post by: katinka on June 03, 2006, 05:34:41 AM
Love the "soft gloomy" keep writing
kat ;)