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Poets Corner => Review My Poetry => Topic started by: eric on October 03, 2009, 06:59:14 PM

Title: [removed]
Post by: eric on October 03, 2009, 06:59:14 PM
removed for the time being
Title: Re: [removed]
Post by: Mark H on October 04, 2009, 03:56:32 AM
It's a bit telly and might be better structured like this.

removed

for the time
being.

and it needs a period on the end so we know when to stop reading. NOTE: I have added one for you.

Bar that, one of your best!

Mark
Title: Re: [removed]
Post by: eric on October 04, 2009, 09:30:24 AM
Thank
you, Mark.
I think.

By the way, I'm out of ink.
Do you have a quark?
Or crank?
Title: Re:removing a poem
Post by: swayingelk1 on October 07, 2009, 03:13:06 PM
Eric, Mark or any mavin,
How does one remove a poem?  I have a poem posted which I want to remove "for the time being," how do I do that?  thank you thank you.     swayingelk1
Title: Re: [removed]
Post by: Mark H on October 07, 2009, 03:44:20 PM
Since the mods clipped our wings all you can do is edit the original post (click the modify button top right of post), delete the poem, and leave a message such as 'Nothing to see here!.
Title: Re: removing and rewiting
Post by: swayingelk1 on October 07, 2009, 10:43:40 PM
Mark,

thank you for your response.  I decided to try to rewrite this.  If you have time and inclination could you check my poem's title Bread Baking in the Moonlight (or something like that, it's late) and see if the rewritten poem is there.   If this rewrite dulls everybody out, I have another one in mind - I actually I put in about 70% of it and somehow deleated the page and once again was foiled by short term memory loss, testing to begin later this month.
swayingelk1
Title: Re: [removed]
Post by: eric on October 07, 2009, 11:15:01 PM
elkie person.  you apparently put your post in the wrong thread by mistake.  IMO it is probably (technically at least) "trolling" to talk about your own writing issues in another person's thread, but don't worry.  just copy what you said and post it in the correct thread, if you wish.