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Title: Seedit: Chapter 2 (1200 words)
Post by: thatollie on January 11, 2009, 08:30:05 AM
Piece deleted due to publishing attempt. Very Sorry.
Title: Re: Seedit: Chapter 2 (1200 words)
Post by: Don on January 11, 2009, 11:53:17 AM
Interesting chapter, Mr. Ollie.

I'm wondering if the good doctor's Swiss cheese memory is going to be a problem later on. What fun would it be to scare the hell out of him if he forgot about it in the time it took him to run to the next room?

On the other hand, it would be an ingenious (and comical) plot device if someone/thing were trying to scare him to death only to be foiled by his absence of a short-term memory. Would this someone/thing die of frustration after a gazillion vain attempts, hoist on their own petard?

Guess I'll have to wait for chapter 3.  :)  Well done.
Title: Re: Seedit: Chapter 2 (1200 words)
Post by: thatollie on January 12, 2009, 11:42:13 AM
Cheers Don, glad you liked it.
It really was interesting to write.